a poem
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clickclick4 Offline

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a poem
eyeliner sharp enough to carve out someones heart
and a light in your eyes that exposes me like a spotlight
you could get away with murder
or paint the sky in a night

you are limitless and dear lord i want you to succeed

your voice is utterly, painfully human
and you are not perfect
but you are good enough

then you lean in close to me and my head hits the mirror
03-13-2017, 11:31 AM
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Blackrainbow Offline

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RE: a poem
good poem
03-13-2017, 01:49 PM
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Cammy Offline
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RE: a poem
clickclick4: I love your poem. Do you have any more to share with us? I for one would love to read some more of your poetry.
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05-24-2017, 04:56 PM
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