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Tangled Web Offline
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Angry  venting
The fire that burns deep in my soul
Is fueled by all the things that you did to me
It rages out of control
Giving me the energy to keep living this miserable existence
The tears that fall
Onto this burning inferno
Causes the smoke to rise burning my eyes causing even more tears to fall
It hurts to touch
The heat that hits my face scalds me even as the water pours out of my eyes
Like the bubbling water pouring out of tap
Enraged….. full of so much hatred
It hurts to breathe
It is suffocating
Being filled with so much evil, hatred, rage
You did this to me and I will hate you forever
THE END
"You may not remember what someone says or does, but you will never forget how they made you feel" Mac Anderson.
07-20-2012, 01:13 AM
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RE: venting
Wow what an evocative vent. Very powerful.
07-20-2012, 04:40 PM
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Friendship/Support  RE: venting
(07-20-2012, 01:13 AM)Tangled Web Wrote: The fire that burns deep in my soul
Is fueled by all the things that you did to me
It rages out of control
Giving me the energy to keep living this miserable existence
The tears that fall
Onto this burning inferno
Causes the smoke to rise burning my eyes causing even more tears to fall
It hurts to touch
The heat that hits my face scalds me even as the water pours out of my eyes
Like the bubbling water pouring out of tap
Enraged….. full of so much hatred
It hurts to breathe
It is suffocating
Being filled with so much evil, hatred, rage
You did this to me and I will hate you forever
THE END

Well said Tangled Web!
07-21-2012, 09:16 PM
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RE: venting
Tangled Web,

That was powerful, Your an excellent writer...well done
silliness wakes up your brain. Fantasy is a ingredient in living, looking through a telescope the wrong way. When you do, it helps you to laugh at life. Smile

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07-23-2012, 09:30 PM
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RE: venting
Thank you everyone for heariing me and replying. It means alot too me
Tangled
"You may not remember what someone says or does, but you will never forget how they made you feel" Mac Anderson.
07-24-2012, 06:06 PM
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RE: venting
I feel expressing any emotion through any kind of writing is very therapeutic. Tangled, you did a wonderful job to express how you were feeling that as I was reading it it jumped out and I felt all of your different emotions and pain you were feeling at that moment. Do you write often because if you do don't stop, you have a gift of words. Smile hope to read more.

take care

Kathleen
silliness wakes up your brain. Fantasy is a ingredient in living, looking through a telescope the wrong way. When you do, it helps you to laugh at life. Smile

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07-25-2012, 09:17 AM
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Tangled Web Offline
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RE: venting
thank you Kathleen. I used to write alot more than I do now. Occassionally something comes to me and if I am by my computer I can put it down. Haven't had a lot of time to write or been in the right head space for it, but I am glad you glad you liked it.
"You may not remember what someone says or does, but you will never forget how they made you feel" Mac Anderson.
07-31-2012, 11:37 AM
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RE: venting
your very welcome Tangled Web

take care....

Kathleen
silliness wakes up your brain. Fantasy is a ingredient in living, looking through a telescope the wrong way. When you do, it helps you to laugh at life. Smile

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08-01-2012, 09:59 PM
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