Poem entitled Lost and Alone
Author Message
9Bears Offline
Member
*****

Posts: 10
Threads: 3
Joined: Mar 2019
#1
Poem entitled Lost and Alone
Lost and Alone
(Part I)

Walking down an empty street
weeds grow through the cracks
beneath my feet.
The sun shines
on a hot summer day,
I feel as if
I've lost my way,
wandering alone,
my identity completely unknown.
Squinting to see my way
through the hot summer haze
I'm in a daze,
out of phase,
with my inner ways.
With no place to go
and no way to grow,
I wander away
the hot summer day
lost and alone,
completely unknown.

-Me
03-11-2019, 08:02 PM
Find Reply
mosaic Offline
just another one of us
*****

Posts: 1,010
Threads: 123
Joined: Dec 2011
#2
RE: Poem entitled Lost and Alone
that's a very powerful poem - it evokes the loneliness and desolation feeling
03-12-2019, 07:15 PM
Find Reply
Collectively US Offline
Senior Member
*****

Posts: 108
Threads: 9
Joined: May 2018
#3
RE: Poem entitled Lost and Alone
Well done...strong feelings and visual.
03-13-2019, 03:34 AM
Find Reply


Possibly Related Threads...
Thread Author Replies Views Last Post
May trigger poem I wrote: angel with wings 4 2,319 05-18-2018, 11:48 PM
Last Post: The People
Happy Group effort poem? Add the next line! shades 11 7,033 05-18-2018, 11:47 PM
Last Post: The People
  a poem clickclick4 2 1,045 05-24-2017, 04:56 PM
Last Post: Cammy
  poem angel with wings 1 1,425 06-27-2016, 06:41 AM
Last Post: jamesjohnson5551
  poem: void of you angel with wings 1 1,230 06-27-2016, 06:39 AM
Last Post: jamesjohnson5551

Forum Jump: