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Poem entitled Lost and Alone - 9Bears - 03-11-2019
Lost and Alone
(Part I)
Walking down an empty street
weeds grow through the cracks
beneath my feet.
The sun shines
on a hot summer day,
I feel as if
I've lost my way,
wandering alone,
my identity completely unknown.
Squinting to see my way
through the hot summer haze
I'm in a daze,
out of phase,
with my inner ways.
With no place to go
and no way to grow,
I wander away
the hot summer day
lost and alone,
completely unknown.
-Me
RE: Poem entitled Lost and Alone - mosaic - 03-12-2019
that's a very powerful poem - it evokes the loneliness and desolation feeling
RE: Poem entitled Lost and Alone - Collectively US - 03-13-2019
Well done...strong feelings and visual.